DARE TO BELIEVE (Free verse, short story format)
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    DARE TO BELIEVE (Free verse, short story format)

    I was in one of my moods, not a good one but not a bad one either. I had been on a long ride on my Valkyrie with a group of guys and we had a Harley break down and spent some time on the side of the road. Finally got the bike running and headed home. I was hungry and stopped at Wendy's. I was approached by an older man outside who asked me for money to get something to eat. I told him if he was hungry to come in with me and I would get him something but I was NOT going to give him money. He smiled and followed me in. I told him to get whatever he wanted. He asked 'Even a combo meal?' I said 'Anything you want.' He was a very happy camper! Later that evening I was at home, alone as usual when this story started forming in my head. I hurriedly wrote down what was coming out and the result is what you are about to read.



    DARE TO BELIEVE

    It is 2:00am. The moon is full and the stars are bright.
    On a long lonely stretch of road, I sit. My bike quit
    running over an hour ago and for no apparent reason. I have
    been over the engine four times, there's nothing wrong. Cell
    phone has no service and I don't know who I would call any way,
    I am out here in the middle of nowhere. Off in the distance a bright light
    appears on the horizon. Funny, I did not see a road off in that
    direction. The light is getting larger and brighter, who ever it is,
    they are approaching very quickly. I hurry and dig through my saddle
    bag to find my Colt 45. Making sure it is loaded and chambered, I stow
    it in the back of my pants. The air is getting much colder as the
    bright light approaches. I can see my breath now, this just doesn't feel
    right. I'm getting nervous, heart is pounding, breath is getting quicker
    and the palms of my hands are getting moist. I take what I believe is the
    best strategic spot I have available to me, one hand on my Colt the other
    nervously holding my last cigarette. My bike and I are now lit up like a
    Christmas tree from the bright light. I cannot see a thing! Clearly I am
    at a huge disadvantage. I say a last minute prayer as I move to the side
    trying to get a better view of what is now dead in front of me and only 30 feet
    away. The chills that are running through my body along with the hair on the
    back of my neck standing straight up now, has me greatly concerned. I have
    never felt this way before! I drop my cigarette to the ground as I raise my
    hand to shade my now squinting eyes, in hopes of getting a glimpse of what's
    going on beyond the light. A large human like figure is now apparent.
    I am trying to pull the Colt from the back of my pants. I cannot!
    Muscles will not respond! Not any of them! The figure is getting closer and I am
    unable to run or do anything, I am motionless! Then I hear it! CARLOS! You do fear
    God. You have lived an honest life. You give of yourself when you have nothing left
    to give. I hear your prayers before every meal and before you go to sleep at night.
    I heard the prayer you said just moments ago. You ask nothing for yourself but ask
    for those all around you. CARLOS! You are a good man, you set a fine example and I
    need you here for years to come. May you continue to walk with the Lord. May your
    journeys in life continue to bring the happiness I have seen. Peace be with you Carlos.
    AND ALSO WITH YOU, was all I could mutter. The figure and bright light was gone as fast
    as it had arrived. As my body relaxed and my head cleared up, I found myself standing in
    my driveway along side my bike.
    DO YOU DARE TO BELIEVE?

    WELL DO YA?

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    Cool

    Yes...and another good one !!!
    " Truth is often deemed rude, blunt and to the point which is why so few make their friend " Freddy Hayler ..352-267-1553 Sanford, FLA Gutterman6000@Gmail.com

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    Amen Brother.

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    You. My friend have a great talent. Keep it up.

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    Thanks

    Thanks to those of you who took the time to leave a comment, it is greatly appreciated, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you others that read it enjoyed it too.

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