A dark short story I worte long ago

[Steve 0080]

Perfectly describes one's feelings after a DIVORCE if you were on the side that did not want one...

[Westernbiker]

Perfectly describes one's feelings after a DIVORCE if you were on the side that did not want one...

Yes I was on the side of not wanting it.
You are very insiteful to see the similarities.

[Elroy]

Yes I was on the side of not wanting it.
You are very insiteful to see the similarities.

You're fantastic imagery did not make it too difficult to feel the sadness of the writer. Enjoyed the read.

Solely for the sake of literary discussion, and not as a narrative to yours or others' divorces, from another perspective your words could well describe someone's world in their current marriage/life or prior to a divorce. And emerging from the cavern could reveal a rejuvenated, plentiful world.

Once, not too long ago, while struggling with my own issues, I wrote my own piece with a theme of "Alone inside my mind". Had a similar tone as yours. Thanks for sharing.

[Westernbiker]

You're fantastic imagery did not make it too difficult to feel the sadness of the writer. Enjoyed the read.

Solely for the sake of literary discussion, and not as a narrative to yours or others' divorces, from another perspective your words could well describe someone's world in their current marriage/life or prior to a divorce. And emerging from the cavern could reveal a rejuvenated, plentiful world.

Once, not too long ago, while struggling with my own issues, I wrote my own piece with a theme of "Alone inside my mind". Had a similar tone as yours. Thanks for sharing.

I agree with what you said. It could be taken and written just a bit different to reflect the dawn of a new and better day.
I would also enjoy a chance to read what you have written, if you care to share Elroy.